I am a Year 8 student at Tauranga Intermediate School, New Zealand.
Hamish you did a good poem about your self and it really describes you well. To improve your poem instead of writing it you could also put a image at the back of your poem.
Great comment Derek. It's demonstrates that you understand the word types, Hamish. Yes, you did need to add an image.
Hamish you did a good poem about your self and it really describes you well. To improve your poem instead of writing it you could also put a image at the back of your poem.
ReplyDeleteGreat comment Derek. It's demonstrates that you understand the word types, Hamish. Yes, you did need to add an image.
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